Feedback 2 on Writing a Paper - Introduction

 To start off with a research paper, I was guided with some FAQ:

Introduction:

1. Should be an overview of the paper or report, instead of the event. Normally it starts with " This paper aims to... " 
2. How you analyze data should be under Methods or Methodology.
3. If an event were studied and published in the past, put it in LR. Else write it in a dedicated section. 
4. What's the origin of the Topic? who did what research and what are the findings? Do you agree or disagree with the findings? Why?
5. Add in Methodology. How did you collect data? Why use questionnaire and follow up interview? Sampling method. (insert demographic profile of respondents here). Data analysis methods.