Feeback 1 on Writing a Paper - Common mistakes

 In order to mention "Evaluation", or "learning", I was advised to follow Kirkpatrick's 4 levels of evaluation

1. Level of learner satisfaction 

- use questionnaire survey to check whether learners are happy with the learning events or not

2. Level of knowledge / skill acquisition 

- use quiz or test to check whether learners have achieved the intended learning outcomes or not

3. Level of application of new knowledge / skills 

- use observation checklist to check whether learners have applied what they have acquired in other contexts

4. Level of ROI 

- use balance sheet to measure total cost spent on competition plus research expenses and compare it with the return on investment to see whether it is economical to teach cyber security through competition or not. 

Case Studies
Case studies should follow the protocol proposed by Robert Yin (2009)

Writing Style
Try to avoid showing short form in the title.